little x soldier

Hi Just leaving something small. This poem is exceptional long compared to the others but I guess that can't be helped. I didn't understand anything at first. I had to ...

flawless.. Ik heb flawless opgezocht en het betekent perfect en 'watertight'. Welke van die twee? volgens mij perfect.. waarvoor zijn die -""-? sla regels over had zin :P

Two writers, two different worlds. Because we didn’t discus about what to write, we had different pictures in our mind we wanted to write at that moment. Know not how ...

hi, I do want to comment but you know how bad I do that and now that I do after months it could be worse. but I'm trying.. It's short ...

I agree with all others above me but I wont be reviewing (a lot) because I can't. I didn't understand the last pieces.. Wait where is mom? "Mom where are ...

See, our house is the sort that is extraordinarily conductive of noise. For every night as far as I can remember, I would here the noises coming from the second ...

*laughs*... For some reasons I read it like twice and it didn't seem to flow. Can't say it's forced ... Nywwz, sheep doesn't get the point.... Just like Writersdomian said, ...

"I do not write for such dull elves, as have not a great deal of ingenuity themselves." Frill farfel farcel To say what I should say... I like the words ...

pens... pencil... Writing stuff with names from Hogwarts! :P This type of thing makes me depressed. I wish I could go to hogwarts and doo all this! Thats really really ...

I don't know if I understood it well. The beginning was bit confusing to me the first time I read it. The more I scrolled down reading it became more ...

I like it... You clarified the little moments.. Whispering the future into her eyelids As they split open in violent storms. This the part I like the most, well thought... ...

Yay! Express your feelings... nice enough! I liked the stucture the most.. first six then four and at last two... (growing to little) :) And a very common title... Keep ...

i dont understand this why do i have to be so strange is it me, is it something ive done? i want to get out of this life, just get ...

It's very well written.. It's more like a story you're telling. The only dramatic emotion it could bring in me was.. sad, missing sadness. I don't understand the title... And ...

quite a riddle when I read the poem.. but after what you said.. too fast to figure out! I want you to wake up and be with me and be ...